His chin just clears
the edge of the stone birdbath.
Pudgy hands grip the edge,
balancing him as he peers
into the water and at
the two stone birds permanently frozen there.
His mouth opens slightly in awe
and his hair fringes his soft eyebrows.
in a picture given to Granmummy
and now on Mummy’s shelf above
the little drawers, the bureau, the floor.
of his Graduation Photo where
at age eighteen, he probably
would not remember the scene
were it not frozen in time and
now in loose rhyme.
chin now darkened slightly
by the shadow of a beard.
His jacket, tie, and shirt in perfect order,
his hair now neatly trimmed,
unfringed.
worn nearly every day.
His chin would be well above the edge of the birdbath rim.
The curiosity remains, however,
and the sunshine of that earlier day
will forever follow him.

8 comments:
this is pretty good. though try reading it aloud, some of it sounds like it doesnt fit. I am also a writer, check out my blog www.lifeofbryn.blogger.com
oops. sorry. www.lifeofbryn.blogspot.com hahaha
Congratulations on your new blog.
I'll be visiting everyday!
welcome aboard! happy blogging!
ßry™
http://bry-hq.blogspot.com
Dear beegirl,
I wrote the poem in very free verse style, and have read it aloud, but thanks for your comments. I will look at it again.
Checked out your blog - like it, except I have trouble reading the orange type.
Don't know if I'll be posting everyday - just getting used to this
Again, thanks!
Dear Bry,
Thanks for the welcome. I am so confused about comments and communicating... I need to study this whole thing more!
Determined to get there... and to post more.
thank you for your comment, and i'll be posting up some of my poetry soon so you can give me some advice- if you want to. i'd love that. :)
I'd be happy to...
Do you know if there is some way that blogger can let me know if you post something new?
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